Following my first draft and the feedback I received, I returned to editing and I created my second draft of my documentary. I had to wait some time until I could edit my second draft, as I had to wait for my main interviewee to return from getting her VISA. I was advised to replace some back tracking shots with more front facing shots, which I did and added into the montage sequence towards the end of my documentary. I equally edited in a layered video, which references some of the shots in my inspiration for shots blog, which refer to the themes of identity. I am expecting further feedback on this draft, which I am assuming will be around some interview audio. However I will most likely act upon this when I receive feedback and more in depth critiques of the audio.
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