Following my first draft, I received some feedback on it. I was sent an email detailing some of the criticisms, which highlight some changes needed for the music and some inserts. The main part of my feedback was that I needed to be clearer on my message and what I am trying to convey through my documentary. The feedback I received in person was along these lines, however in more detail. There is some clumsy interview editing that I must correct and I was advised to re-record some interview audio, as some parts of my documentary have clearer audio than others. In addition to re-recording some interview audio, I was also encouraged to record some shots that differ, as I have a lot of tracking shots from behind and it would be nice to have some tracking shots from the front. Upon this feedback, I need to arrange a new filming date for Beaut and find time to re-record her interview audio and then edit that in again. My next step in this process is to produce a second draft and the report back on the feedback on that.
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