After reviewing my third rough cut, I was given some feedback and small tweaks to create my final documentary product. Most of the feedback was revolved around some of the text, as I could make some of the text longer, as it goes away too quickly at the beginning. I was equally advised to change the beginning music to make it younger to suit my broadcaster and my target audience, as my current music does not necessarily suit a BBCIII style documentary. There were a few transitions that I was advised could be smoother, so I intend to hide these cuts using some archived footage. There were a few grammatical errors in my documentary, for example for one fact, I was encouraged to replace the word 'proceeds' with 'continues'. The last criticisms I was given was targeted more towards the end of my documentary, as I was encouraged to make the end of the documentary more smooth and to lower the final audio over the montage section of my documentary. These are all minimal changes, so my next blog will most likely be my final documentary.
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